yo malev i'm gonna post my lyrics here aight i'll be really busy and wont log in for a long time
here are da rules
5 bars
respond before thursday
yes i'm new but beat you i will/
i'ma newbie but watchout i'll kill/
my lyricism is yet to hit criticism/
yo lyricism is yet to break....a schizm/
see dis jab jab 1 2 ya face is blue/
left hook,right hook BOOM ya through/
dont wear a bra i blast at yo glass jaw/
a featherweight yet da best you eva saw/
my new skills my ol grills juz complement it/
don get offended good luck i neva meant it/
aight man good luck i don know when i can log in again
thanks for da battle
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People_nation vs malev
by people_nation on Sun Jan 14, 2007 3:38 am
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by Malev on Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:14 pm
yao,
this new gye here sticks in simplicity
spits the rhymes that'll make u perplexcity/
i'm the stratigical person in reformatory
killin u and u r homies makes me satisfactory/
i know u r mum a flapper
i'll fuck her and make u clean our zygote dipper/
ma words runs through u r veins
detects u r thoughts and brusts u r brains/
coz this will make u pain
and when u loose this battle u 'll cry insane/
this new gye here sticks in simplicity
spits the rhymes that'll make u perplexcity/
i'm the stratigical person in reformatory
killin u and u r homies makes me satisfactory/
i know u r mum a flapper
i'll fuck her and make u clean our zygote dipper/
ma words runs through u r veins
detects u r thoughts and brusts u r brains/
coz this will make u pain
and when u loose this battle u 'll cry insane/
start tryin or leave dyin
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by ThaProphecy on Sun Jan 14, 2007 8:25 pm
ok..im not gunna lie.. both were really bad.
I'll vote for people nation tho, just because his made a little more sense.
I can't even vote in categories cuz there were no multis, basically no punchlines, etc.
The point of a battle is to MAKE FUN and put down the other person as much as you can.. not talk about how good YOUR OWN rhymes are.
VOTE: People_Nation ... by default
I'll vote for people nation tho, just because his made a little more sense.
I can't even vote in categories cuz there were no multis, basically no punchlines, etc.
The point of a battle is to MAKE FUN and put down the other person as much as you can.. not talk about how good YOUR OWN rhymes are.
VOTE: People_Nation ... by default
Can't deny I'm the flyest that ride for the fagside
Get down or collide cuz my side don't jive
We ride dick like beehive and cut deep like abused wives
We on top, with copz, sit swoll on big cocks
Shuttin' down the P wall on air shots and hops
On every block I'm not, can't quit and won't stop suckin dick
Like Poke I wreck shop, bleed blocks and stacks knots
Get down or collide cuz my side don't jive
We ride dick like beehive and cut deep like abused wives
We on top, with copz, sit swoll on big cocks
Shuttin' down the P wall on air shots and hops
On every block I'm not, can't quit and won't stop suckin dick
Like Poke I wreck shop, bleed blocks and stacks knots
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by people_nation on Sun Jan 14, 2007 8:32 pm
yeah thats cuz it's both our first battles thanks for putting up wit it and voting
we'll go to 3 votes alright???
we'll go to 3 votes alright???
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by ThaProphecy on Sun Jan 14, 2007 8:45 pm
people_nation wrote:yeah thats cuz it's both our first battles thanks for putting up wit it and voting
we'll go to 3 votes alright???
It's cool man. Stick around here and veterans will help you out with ur battling. Lots of people got help here and are pretty good now. Just don't take criticism personally... take the advice, and use it to make u better.
Can't deny I'm the flyest that ride for the fagside
Get down or collide cuz my side don't jive
We ride dick like beehive and cut deep like abused wives
We on top, with copz, sit swoll on big cocks
Shuttin' down the P wall on air shots and hops
On every block I'm not, can't quit and won't stop suckin dick
Like Poke I wreck shop, bleed blocks and stacks knots
Get down or collide cuz my side don't jive
We ride dick like beehive and cut deep like abused wives
We on top, with copz, sit swoll on big cocks
Shuttin' down the P wall on air shots and hops
On every block I'm not, can't quit and won't stop suckin dick
Like Poke I wreck shop, bleed blocks and stacks knots
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by loenatic on Mon Jan 15, 2007 9:25 am
both of you should go check out the rhyme toturial posted in battlezone, it teaches you alot of shit and its useful as fuck
vote goes to people_nation tho
but next time before yall battle, go check out the toturial
vote goes to people_nation tho
but next time before yall battle, go check out the toturial
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