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Skilltester Stabone vs Anal Excavation

Postby skilltester on Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:42 am

This new guy'll do you, plus 5 alike - the whole six pack
The readers boo you, your raps' like a flock of ducks - they wack wack
check me: I’m not Fred Flinstone but still I manage to make your bitch’s Bedrock
I’ll turn you like Barney into Rubble cuz that’s the only way you fuckin rock
waiting for your round, gets more energy than the batteries on your girl's dildo
i'm surely not an M fan but i rap my ass off like EM while you vocalize like dido
Can't make me laugh,although it's clear to everyone you're just a clown
I'm not Osama,but if you had a twin I'd knock both of you down
It's like I battle myself...I'm always the center of atention
As I bring more gore than the 2000 United States' election
I’m like David Copperfield because my rhymes are magic, that’s right
This round is a vanishing solution, will make you disapper from my sight
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Postby Anal Excavation on Wed Apr 09, 2008 12:17 pm

I was afraid there’d be no material
For this battle before you posted simplistic bullshit
But once it was there you gave me enough to eat you up.
Comin’in sayin’ “I'm new lookin’ for someone to battle.”
And now you got some parodies with Osama an’ Gore?
God damn they’re as easy as Paris Hilton to rhyme with.
This is a funny situation, and a bad one for you
I don't even rap; I just started listening to hip hop, and then laughed at it too.
I bet your pretty good too, even renowned
That’s sad cause rap has got some piss pour lyrics
After looking at the scores for other battles I thought:
Flows? Multis? What the cockpiece is that?
I won't bother with the technical bullshit you faggots in "the game" beat about
I really just came to heckle your shitty culture
And whatever other shitfest you bloated cunts praise.
It's funny what the "G's" and "bitches" do nowadays
Comin’ on the web looking for a battle
And here I am popping your abscess that hip hop created
To help you realize that you and your culture ain't nothin’ original.
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Postby Dazzla on Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:33 pm

good try anal but u got done on this one on e'rythang
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Postby Anal Excavation on Thu Apr 10, 2008 3:15 pm

My lyrics are better, clearly. You're a fool.
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Postby Dazzla on Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:13 pm

oh yeah of course. apart from none of it fuckin rhymes. muppet
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Postby MeGa87 on Thu Apr 10, 2008 8:41 pm

^^ lol true Anal that was the worst verse ive ever read no joke
tha finest........Me ... sci-fly, whole style stuck up
Used to talk to myself, I told him, "Shut the fuck up!"..........tha finest


no ideas original, thers nothin new under the sun, its never wot you do, but how its done

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Postby ELEPHANT MAN on Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:44 pm

rapping = rhyming

anal there wasnt 1 rhyme in that verse??????????
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Postby Anal Excavation on Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:47 pm

Well fuck, how the shit do I rhyme? can you guys help me with the first two lines please. I thought the first one rhymed though.

no material afr
For this battle before posted simplistic

damn I didn't realize how hard it really is to rap
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Postby ELEPHANT MAN on Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:24 pm

anal if it was your 1st try i think some of the stuff u said was ok but u just never rhymed i dont undertsand y u didnt really

And now you got some parodies with Osama an’ Gore?

^^^^^ here u could have said something like

And now you got some parodies with Osama an’ Gore?
my rhymes be hardcore always putting bitches on the floor

not great but u can see the rhymes in there and it flows much better imo,just keep practising use metaphors and add comedy in there things i wud use are

your in a daze/your now my slave/
beating me is like finding osama in a cave/

just metaphors like that which people will understand really
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Postby Anal Excavation on Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:18 am

The problem was I was I wrote the lyrics, then tried to put them in a rap format which was obvious for you guys to see, and didn't work it at all. When I wrote it I thought it had the capability to be rapped to, now I don't only cause you're saying it doesn't. Maybe I'm inept, but I can't see the rhyming in your lines either.

Using skilltester's verses I see rhymes with:
This new guy'll do you, plus 5 alike
your raps' like a flock of ducks - they wack wack

nothing with:

I'm not Fred Flinstone but still I manage to make your bitch's Bedrock

^^ how does it rhyme? I see no rhythmic structure with it. :?: :?: :?:
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Postby oNe on Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:13 pm

Anal Excavation wrote:The problem was I was I wrote the lyrics, then tried to put them in a rap format which was obvious for you guys to see, and didn't work it at all. When I wrote it I thought it had the capability to be rapped to, now I don't only cause you're saying it doesn't. Maybe I'm inept, but I can't see the rhyming in your lines either.

Using skilltester's verses I see rhymes with:
This new guy'll do you, plus 5 alike
your raps' like a flock of ducks - they wack wack

nothing with:

I'm not Fred Flinstone but still I manage to make your bitch's Bedrock

^^ how does it rhyme? I see no rhythmic structure with it. :?: :?: :?:


skilltester wrote:This new guy'll do you, plus 5 alike - the whole six pack
The readers boo you, your raps' like a flock of ducks - they wack wack
check me: I’m not Fred Flinstone but still I manage to make your bitch’s Bedrock
I’ll turn you like Barney into Rubble cuz that’s the only way you fuckin rock
waiting for your round, gets more energy than the batteries on your girl's dildo
i'm surely not an M fan but i rap my ass off like EM while you vocalize like dido
Can't make me laugh,although it's clear to everyone you're just a clown
I'm not Osama,but if you had a twin I'd knock both of you down
It's like I battle myself...I'm always the center of atention
As I bring more gore than the 2000 United States' election
I’m like David Copperfield because my rhymes are magic, that’s right
This round is a vanishing solution, will make you disapper from my sight
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Postby Anal Excavation on Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:58 am

Ohhhhhhh, I see it. Thanks
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Postby Novakaine on Sun Apr 13, 2008 9:25 pm

www.myspace.com/triniboiz
The greatest rapper EVER died on March 9, 1997
The fans of hip hop r killing hip hop not d artists
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Postby Anal Excavation on Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:28 am

Holy fuck, thanks
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Postby SHeeshYoureCORNY on Tue May 13, 2008 12:41 am

I belive the singer's name is pronounced "Die-do"
not "dih-dough"
f*** that s****
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