Aight, Make this due by Monday at 5pm Central time. But Imma drop on the spot as us u al.
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VERSEital vs RapJuice
by VERSEital on Sat Sep 06, 2008 9:54 pm
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by VERSEital on Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:47 pm
I spike this Rap Juice, a wanna be emcee
He play "Sharades" like Papoose
Watch me get away with Murder like the dude who attacked "Proof"
The way I let the Mac loose, you'd think Sigel got dropped
Im like the UPS man, how I leave you a box....
It's made of Pine Wood, twist you in ways that no spine should
His flow is ass backwards, like Dre tryin to sign Suge
Come to my hood, and leave in a few pieces
His body be around more chalk than School Teachers
This is the new "Ether" a hit of that blue reefer
In a battle I'll take everything from his hat to two sneakers
Oh? He's a animal? I'll handle this cat like Zoo Keepers
The new leader, and didn't need a few features
Catch me in the two seater, flowin tighter than new beaters
U already know it's a rap, when the say Im the next to blow just know it's a gat
BRAAAAT
MUTHER FUCKA
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He play "Sharades" like Papoose
Watch me get away with Murder like the dude who attacked "Proof"
The way I let the Mac loose, you'd think Sigel got dropped
Im like the UPS man, how I leave you a box....
It's made of Pine Wood, twist you in ways that no spine should
His flow is ass backwards, like Dre tryin to sign Suge
Come to my hood, and leave in a few pieces
His body be around more chalk than School Teachers
This is the new "Ether" a hit of that blue reefer
In a battle I'll take everything from his hat to two sneakers
Oh? He's a animal? I'll handle this cat like Zoo Keepers
The new leader, and didn't need a few features
Catch me in the two seater, flowin tighter than new beaters
U already know it's a rap, when the say Im the next to blow just know it's a gat
BRAAAAT
MUTHER FUCKA
VERSE
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Rap-Juice on Mon Sep 08, 2008 4:27 pm
yo im a bit busy i will post my verse up first thing tmoz ok.I only saw battle was up jus now so im nt taking longer on a verse.peace
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Rap-Juice on Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:50 pm
omg your wack as fuck, I should just smack him up
Becase everything line that made up his battle suxed
Give it up, you just been roasted,leave your spleen toasted
Congratulations you have the worst verse I have ever seen posted
Leave your corpse like fish food right after I slaughter this dude
Talking bout pulling triggers fam...yea only on your water pistol
Your rhymes make no sense talking bout bullshit sharades
he likes reading his own rhymes as there made for retards
Leave rap alone coz seriously, theres no future G!!
as your rhymes are boring to stare at like computer screens
Your a bumbling fool and you really need your grammer tested
Maybe one day he'll realise his a no-body like anorexics!!!
People sleep on you but this not for snoring,ur not hot your boring
maybe youll stop the waring when somebody boots you off this forum
He asked me to come to his hood, lol plz this is an easy win
yer ill come your hood to find you hiding inside of a wheelybin!!
Becase everything line that made up his battle suxed
Give it up, you just been roasted,leave your spleen toasted
Congratulations you have the worst verse I have ever seen posted
Leave your corpse like fish food right after I slaughter this dude
Talking bout pulling triggers fam...yea only on your water pistol
Your rhymes make no sense talking bout bullshit sharades
he likes reading his own rhymes as there made for retards
Leave rap alone coz seriously, theres no future G!!
as your rhymes are boring to stare at like computer screens
Your a bumbling fool and you really need your grammer tested
Maybe one day he'll realise his a no-body like anorexics!!!
People sleep on you but this not for snoring,ur not hot your boring
maybe youll stop the waring when somebody boots you off this forum
He asked me to come to his hood, lol plz this is an easy win
yer ill come your hood to find you hiding inside of a wheelybin!!
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Novakaine on Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:34 am
Verseital started corny as fuck but ended up bein ayt
Flow - Tie
Multis - Tie
Punches - Verseital
Personals - Verseital (only had one in da opener an it was blah buh odda nigga got none)
Wordplay - Verseital
Vote - Verseital
(school teacher line was decent)
Flow - Tie
Multis - Tie
Punches - Verseital
Personals - Verseital (only had one in da opener an it was blah buh odda nigga got none)
Wordplay - Verseital
Vote - Verseital
(school teacher line was decent)
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Rap-Juice on Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:26 pm
dude are u serious ur are probally a noob that knows fuck all about battling
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by abilitee on Fri Sep 12, 2008 1:56 am
Thats exactly what he is ^
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Novakaine on Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:58 am
if i was u id erase ya verse b4 more people c it. "Maybe one day he'll realise his a no-body like anorexics!!!"
u hav one good punch an expect 2 win shit
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Rap-Juice on Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:33 pm
my structure was decent and it flows well,hell i even played back of one of his lines. What did he do just talked about pappose and murdering me with his gat,come back with sum real feedback
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by VERSEital on Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:29 pm
Rap-Juice wrote:my structure was decent and it flows well,hell i even played back of one of his lines. What did he do just talked about pappose and murdering me with his gat,come back with sum real feedback
You say you played back one of my lines which in the rules it clearly states NO FLIPPING
When I battle I freestyle my VERSE off the top. Thats why I posted so fast. Very rarely will I ever not drop on the spot which means Im almost always 1st.
NO FLIPPIN SON
And ya VERSE was doo doo, way to simple. This wasn't my best shit but it was nice and it riiiiiiippppppeeeeed u
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by Rap-Juice on Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:16 pm
yer ryte, battling is all about simplicity.You dont need complicated shit, but anyways good battle.Is this site dead or something coz noone has posted a battle since agessssss ago
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Re: VERSEital vs RapJuice
by MACKaroni on Tue Mar 17, 2009 3:51 am
I'm giving this to Verstial.
Both were pretty weak, but this line was an absolutely horrible way to end a verse:
"He asked me to come to his hood, lol plz this is an easy win
yer ill come your hood to find you hiding inside of a wheelybin!!"
A wheelybin??? please bro, that shit is wack.
Both were pretty weak, but this line was an absolutely horrible way to end a verse:
"He asked me to come to his hood, lol plz this is an easy win
yer ill come your hood to find you hiding inside of a wheelybin!!"
A wheelybin??? please bro, that shit is wack.
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