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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 11:32 am    Post subject: CHECK THIS, UNFAIRLY TREATED (GIVE VOTES) Reply with quote

Can you all check this, i lost a battle cos of ''Rhyme Refs'' on another site in a freestyle battle an here are the two verse, check which you think is better, i'll tell you who did them later:

VERSE 1:

stop tryin, stop liein, your a son of a BITCH/
going around "telling" like its fun to "snitch"/
why u got the name sn double o - p - e - d/*
when truth is you wish you could b - e - me/
my flows international like that southwest "airlines"/
U.S to China never catch me spittin them "bair lines"/
i spit lines like a hood chick nice n curvey/
plus back it with a punch thats srtong n sturdy/
u aint gangsta, just like a trashcan your full~of~shit/
your crews hot? bust 12 shots, now your full~of~it/
so now look as snoopd runs as if "fear is cool"/
truth is boy that ya crew anythang but lyrical/
you can call me a backpack cuz i always stay strapped/
your bout as "gangsta" as if "pewie herman" rapped/
ur last on these SB charts, we call it the south,just imagine your jeezey/**
imma gfx artist and fortunately passin you up was far below easy/


AGAINST VERSE 2:

rappin like a chorus, i'll be puttin so many holes through you so you're lookin pourous/
so be cautious, i know you're gonna lose so bad cos i read your horoscope, unlucky for bein Taurus/

i'll kill you with a round-house, or a terrace, all i know, is Snoopd a menance/
kick-in-your-head-fast-as-tennis, drinkin on some 'chris, while i'm writin a diss/

what can you do to me? you full of lies mouth in motion, i'll make you cry like a woman with them sad emotion/
Snoopd keeps it crippin in the south, causin commotion, step 'gainst me, i'll be rubbin yo moms with lotion/

keep it up my wigga? you gettin sock'd , head-locked , You'll find him in the club-of-rock, mouth full of cock/
what a shock, when your mom recieves the photos, your door will be gettin a knock, then she see's your bf mouth-fucking you with jaw-lock/

so don't mock-me, you adolescent publess virgin with spots the size of rocks, large white socks, i know your type/
mosher motherfucker who sits in his room alone, practisin on an old mic, you don't know SHIT about street life, you'll never be a rapper, so quit gettin high as a kite/

this is my 6 of 8 bars of mosterous proportions that will shatter your dreams of winning, but yoy keep on sinning/
beggers can't be chosers, an you a loser, so it's your fucking verse you should be binning/

7th bar, Snoopd regaining glory, that's my story, quit steppin up to me, come back when you stop watchin balla-mory/
you sick an pourly, see, i am more into straight porn, adventure or horror with extreme gory/




OK CHOOSE

WHICH IS BETTER, VERSE 1 OR 2

Thanks

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 11:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It`s not hard to guess who`s verse is who`s SnoopD, but, i honestly gotta go with the first verse, better structure, flow, and wordplay. Sorry man, just bein honest!!

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok...

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

same

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 2:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

imma have to go with the first!

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

soz snoopd but i gotta go with verse 1

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

it's aight, i improved since lol

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

id say dat da 2nd verse iz lyrically betta, but da 1st wud go wiv a beat, so i gotta go wiv da 1st

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

first!

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

how fuckin old is this topic!! LOL

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 12:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

pfft why its bumped 2nd

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 12:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

glocksblast wrote:
pfft why its bumped 2nd


wtf r u doing?

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 10:25 pm    Post subject: Both are good regardless... Reply with quote

But Im gonna have to say verse one...

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